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Woo! I can definitively see that on tv or something!

Good job!

RobSoundtrack responds:

Woot!!! Thanks good buddy

At last! I thought you would never post it!

Anything else you have not posted?

Cahzmana responds:

sorry nothing else yet

Yay, it's CLEAN!! Good job on that one!

That's the first step forward, a good one, but there still plenty ahead!

You had your theme (melody starting at 0:12), it was coherent and pleasant to hear (which is great), but it doesn't have a proper introduction, one in which we can recognize the theme. The actual introduction is introducing another theme that is never fully apearing (or at least I can't recognize enough of the present one).

The passage from 4/4 to 3/4 for 2 seconds at 0:24 is really awkward.

And that's it. That's a good thing you got there!

BowserThedestructive responds:

Thanks, it was an experimental track, didn't really have a way to be introduced. The introduction melody starting after the clown sample, was sort of the introduction, in fact funny enough the introduction melody is an inverse of the main melody. Tricky ;D hehe, I was pleased as well that I was able to create a coherent and pleasant sounding track. I wanted some sort of drop for the 2nd half of the track so I figured an awkward sort of tempo change was in order, it does fit to me even though it may sound too strange to someone else. The main average tempo increases from 140-150bpm in the intro, then averages that until the drop where it drops to around 60 or 80 or 100, I forgot haha, but yea I guess it could of done without that partial slowdown. ^_^ I hope to make more like this in terms of well overall coherence and pleasing to hear.

oohhhh, that's really promising! That would be a great full track!

I'll give you some uplifting candy shortly. It has gone wild.

Good to hear from you regularly!

Yeah, that's a great cover!

Personnaly, I dislike 1:20, work on it, it's kind of breaking the flow there.

If I had a mic I would have helped you... sadly I have no mic right now, and no plan to buy one till the end of the year.

So at all, hell great remix!!

SWeissenP responds:

I agree with you, i will fix that part as soon as possible! I just didn't know how to make it flow better than the part before! Thank you anyway. :)

First time is rough.

Second time it's awesome!!

Not perfect??? I see, but I don't know how you'll do that. The whole intro is like an inside, and you can fully catch the meaning only after listening it once.

Niice!

HEEELLLL YAAAA!!!!

But it didn't have that "put your hands up" feeling, it's really missing. At 0:31 It should have been a full length note instead of the "pluck"

At all, good one!!

lol, that 96 kbs is sexy!!

That's niice!

Cahzmana responds:

this time its 320.
its pretty hard to get a full potent quality if your working with ALLOT flangers/chorus/phaser.
since that creates this 80s feel to the pop-synth strings.

Well, it was a good passive kick nontheless!

I appreciate the lengthy lengthyness!
Good job, keep it up!!

Yeah, well, it's good, but there's "bad notes" if I dare say so... like usual!

Sound quality is great, like usual.

Keep it up!! (btw if you want to know what I say when I mean bad note, ship me the thing, I'll replace with good ones!!)

BowserThedestructive responds:

Well I guess I could, I would have to remaster and re-edit it but I guess I can send over my FLP as is for dissection. I felt there was some bad notes but the quirky factor that felt right for me got to me again.

Computer has no brain... USE YOUR OWN!!!

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