TheZaaL's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Carrot fingers]

Nice job!

But bass is defenitively missing here! But, hey, it's 30 mins of work, and you did a a pretty good job for so little time!

[NO it's awefull]

For once I'll just vote without complaining...

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ARG!!! Too hard! Intro is a little "beginner".

Nice use of slayer! (or is it??? 0.o)

uten responds:

you know I actually agree, the intro was a little bit on the beginner side. but what do you expect? some musicians just play around with sounds and usually a single tune that they might have in there heads, or they might have improvised the tune. the slayer was literally only two states, undamp, and damp, and there were about 4 slayers, two acting as one . meaning the primary lower guitar, then there's the rythem guitar that played through mainly the chorus', and finally the solo slayer, that one's easy to point out :)

[The Bass]

It's a potable song you have there!

Transition at 1:23 is buggy, should be fixed.

Your sinth is... chimpy!!! In this context (dubstep), it feels not quite good. It would be fitting in a trance/techno song, but in this case, a dirtier, less happy sinth would have been great, or at least next to the dub parts.

On the same note, it apeared at some place you inserted a trancy/techno sound in the dup parts that were not fitting at all (ex. 1:58).

Other than that, interesting track!

[Recycled Rubber]

ewwww... GROSS!!!

Always nice to shut down our brain for 1 and a half minute!!

JaShinYa responds:

If we've made you brain dead.... then mission accomplished!

[Nineveh]

@ crazyAce01 : Jackie Chan???? I say it's a Chuck Norris just for the passage at 1:36!!!

[Staying Here(Loopje)]

!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

I don't understand!!! 0.o 96?!?!?!

But there is still some noticable details that can give hints (but it's still better in quality than majority of things posted here :P)

Cahzmana responds:

yeah, there's 1 hint.
Reverb, its hard to master and make it sound good at 96kbps.
but other then that...

[DubDustrial]

YAY!! But I'm not adding you to my MP3 yet :P

The first kick is weird... did you accidentally(or volountary?) doubbled the note?? Because it is breaking the beat

Starting at 0:24, the second snare is a little bit rushed, see my PM for the beat I saw there.

Intro is definitively catchy (at least until the beat comes in)!

Be carefull with the delay, at some points it is off beat (annoying... a little bit!)

Other than that, definitively better than the last ones

BowserThedestructive responds:

OH That's what you meant in the PM!, Oh I see, yes the kick is actually 2 kick's seperated by EQ one for the high part and mid range the other for pure low kick bass tones. Yeah I didn't notice the delay causing it to be off beat my stuff tends to be out of wack sometimes by just the way I find it sounding good sometimes.
I shall try even harder on the next beat.. ^.^ Thanks haha..But yeah there is 2 "intial" kicks then a standard drum kit for the "hats" and another kick mainly crunched and satured and pushed hard for that "sound" but because one has a built in humanizer "I use EZdrummer" but I also have other drum things. Like Stormdrum. And the intial samples making up the partial beat has a "sway" swing to it from fl studio I added just a touch to add something humanize into it. I think the two combination of this caused a slight "un even match up the intial beat sections" but I liked it so much I didn't even notice.