TheZaaL's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bag of Tricks]

Yay, it's CLEAN!! Good job on that one!

That's the first step forward, a good one, but there still plenty ahead!

You had your theme (melody starting at 0:12), it was coherent and pleasant to hear (which is great), but it doesn't have a proper introduction, one in which we can recognize the theme. The actual introduction is introducing another theme that is never fully apearing (or at least I can't recognize enough of the present one).

The passage from 4/4 to 3/4 for 2 seconds at 0:24 is really awkward.

And that's it. That's a good thing you got there!

BowserThedestructive responds:

Thanks, it was an experimental track, didn't really have a way to be introduced. The introduction melody starting after the clown sample, was sort of the introduction, in fact funny enough the introduction melody is an inverse of the main melody. Tricky ;D hehe, I was pleased as well that I was able to create a coherent and pleasant sounding track. I wanted some sort of drop for the 2nd half of the track so I figured an awkward sort of tempo change was in order, it does fit to me even though it may sound too strange to someone else. The main average tempo increases from 140-150bpm in the intro, then averages that until the drop where it drops to around 60 or 80 or 100, I forgot haha, but yea I guess it could of done without that partial slowdown. ^_^ I hope to make more like this in terms of well overall coherence and pleasing to hear.

[SWeissen P - Sail]

Yeah, that's a great cover!

Personnaly, I dislike 1:20, work on it, it's kind of breaking the flow there.

If I had a mic I would have helped you... sadly I have no mic right now, and no plan to buy one till the end of the year.

So at all, hell great remix!!

SWeissenP responds:

I agree with you, i will fix that part as soon as possible! I just didn't know how to make it flow better than the part before! Thank you anyway. :)

[80s]

lol, that 96 kbs is sexy!!

That's niice!

Cahzmana responds:

this time its 320.
its pretty hard to get a full potent quality if your working with ALLOT flangers/chorus/phaser.
since that creates this 80s feel to the pop-synth strings.

[Quirky Swing]

Yeah, well, it's good, but there's "bad notes" if I dare say so... like usual!

Sound quality is great, like usual.

Keep it up!! (btw if you want to know what I say when I mean bad note, ship me the thing, I'll replace with good ones!!)

BowserThedestructive responds:

Well I guess I could, I would have to remaster and re-edit it but I guess I can send over my FLP as is for dissection. I felt there was some bad notes but the quirky factor that felt right for me got to me again.

[NoNameRoughDraft]

Ah, most promising song up to date!!! I like it!!

bad note at 0:12, 0:19, 0:25, 0:32, 0:39, 0:46, 0:53, 1:00, 1:06 and 1:13 : B would be more apropriated (if I'm not mistaking... lol!)

At 0:06, you return at the same notes as your first bar, it feels akward.

Really promising!!!! now GO!!

BowserThedestructive responds:

alright ill see which note fits better for those parts you gave me, thanks it is a really helpful. I want to make something with more emotion, this song shall be the ticket.

[Amusing]

Yeah good!! but it's still chaotic. The bass' progression is good, but all the other things around, whilst good taken individually, merges in a... chaotic way. The main lead and the bass are not quite perfecly fitting.

But at all, good work on the master and keep it up!!

BowserThedestructive responds:

Thanks.

[Evelynnia(WiP) ~TimmY~]

Nan, too expensive. I could try shooting a bullet in your direction, but I doupt it will cross the ocean...

Again, TimmyCahz signed, great work!

P.s. koffiepauze klaar???? (I love google traduction!)

Cahzmana responds:

well the translation isnt 100% correct..
you actually said the following:
Coffee pause done?

or thats what you where going for all along lol..
and yea you could try shooting that bullet..
but isnt it easier to rent a rocket or something and blast me away.
i have a criminal mind you know.

[Perfidious]

Oh, HELL YEAH!!!

Ah, Erkan! Good choice, I'll have to check Acoustica then!

And I enjoyed it.

LOD123 responds:

Glad you enjoyed it man! As you'll know, them samples are way better than the ones I was using before, pretty awesome. I still like the samples from before though, I only use them for electronic stuff now :P

[EmberCore]

Oh wow!! You left some room in there, definitvely gonna give a shoot at something!!

Great job as usual!

RobSoundtrack responds:

Thanks Zaal! DO IT MANG

[SUPER SUMMER OMG!]

!!!!!!!!!!!!!

grrrrreat!! Mad arp skilzz as always!!

Short a little bit, but that's a hit!

Good job, go get that 1st place!!!

OcularNebula responds:

Thanks! This would be the first competition I enter on Newgrounds!