TheZaaL's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Made Of Stone]

Bass is really missing, it feels empty :P

Good job though!

[Lucid Paranoia]

We see that it was kind of structured, BUT too much dissonance. Way too much :P

Also, those drums intros you're using sounds REALLY generic, almost as if you were using the same thing every time. It's starting to get redundant. Just sayin' :P

Keep going,

BowserThedestructive responds:

I was using the same transition from one part to the next I got lazy. I see why there might be some dissonance, but I may enjoy the dissonance I suppose. I shall try harder next time ;)

[Raw power (Janze remix)]

Wtf, man, you just totally spammed my recent notification wall lol

Decent sound there, I like it :P

[Like a Knife]

Haha, you could be surprised how far you can go with 13$ :P

First, listen to that:
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /590285

The quality is going to be better if you follow that.

You could use an auto-tune too, if you use FL there's one called Pitcher. Inform yourself, that's an easy good sounding thing. You could use an auto-tuned track as a reference too, signing while listening to it, it can help alot

Lastly, general tips for the voice recording (NG is awesome, right?)
http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/creato r-resources/voice-recording

Good luck!!

TjpjMusic responds:

thank you for that, it is very helpful. this was more a throw together very quickly type of song where I was looking for feedback on what I was doing in the song
thank you.

[A work in progress]

Cool track. Sure has lots of potential.

You should add a sweep sound at 0:28, or something in the background, it breaks the beat a little bit.

The beat is a bit repetitive. You should use more than one hat sound. It would be also interesting to have a second more powerfull snare hitting at the fourth beat, like boom tack boom TACK boom tack boom Tack. Even better, introduce it at the fourth bar, it will add a nice progression.

You should add a progression at this point (I would have introduced it at 1:25). Little pause (sweep sound or something else), return the bass with a strong lead, two bars with the bass at the same note, one bar with the bass at a lower note, one bar with the bass returning at the same note, and do it again. Your lead should be a melody which starts at first bar and stops at the fourth, repeating on the next four bars.

Great start, keep on going :P

BB-7 responds:

Thanks man

[Dexter Theme Song (Metal)]

5'd + fav, lot of work there!

Congratulation!

[Casual Progression]

For that one, your intro was not representative of your track, you could've added a little bit of work and finesse. Try to use different kicks or drums at different intensity, or just add some variations to it!

For everything else: it was a good job :P You took good use of the dissonance, it fits well with the mood, and it flows correctly! Theme is coherent too, and the timestamp is constant enough.

As I said, the intro lacks of finesse, but at all, good piece!!

BowserThedestructive responds:

Thanks, I was gonna add some variations, but they ruined the feel of the song. So I worked around the kick, and clap and then added variations of the main melody line. Glad I am improving though.

[Maybe Tomorrow(CascadaSTL]

Wow, that's solid!!! Good enough for me, whilst it mabe lacks some depth, but hey! It's an old song!!

Official niice for this!

[Ummet Ozcan-The Box[edit]]

Ya, you're really picking it up lately!!

Good job, keep it up!

[Derp N Bass]

Haha, lurk lurk lurk...

And that's a win!! I'm falling in my old habits, which is stalking everyone without telling them lol!

Ya, keep it up!

z-raven responds:

yup yup. wait till my next tune- this one I'm working on has surpassed 3 minutes omgomgomgomg