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TheZaaL

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Bravo, épique comme toujours!!

Review: (en anglais pour que tout le monde puisse comprendre ;P)

Seems like the guitar could be a little, tiny bit clearer. But, hey! Your songs does not need it to be awesome!!

Keep up the good work!
Par contre, je le prendrai mal si tu ne répond pas!!

P.S. Je montre déjà toutes tes musiques à mes amis!

Elegancia responds:

Merci beaucoup, Zaal :)
Ne m'attendais pas Ãff une rÃffÃ'©ponse franÃffÃ'§aise :P

Yeah, thank you very much!
You think the guitar didn't go well with the rest or what?
Cause it's already pretty clear, didn't use that much distortion this time as i usually do.

Oh. Now you can't be hurt anymore cause i've answered your review :P

Merci infiniment pour ton avis :)

Nice job!

But bass is defenitively missing here! But, hey, it's 30 mins of work, and you did a a pretty good job for so little time!

For once I'll just vote without complaining...

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ARG!!! Too hard! Intro is a little "beginner".

Nice use of slayer! (or is it??? 0.o)

uten responds:

you know I actually agree, the intro was a little bit on the beginner side. but what do you expect? some musicians just play around with sounds and usually a single tune that they might have in there heads, or they might have improvised the tune. the slayer was literally only two states, undamp, and damp, and there were about 4 slayers, two acting as one . meaning the primary lower guitar, then there's the rythem guitar that played through mainly the chorus', and finally the solo slayer, that one's easy to point out :)

It's a potable song you have there!

Transition at 1:23 is buggy, should be fixed.

Your sinth is... chimpy!!! In this context (dubstep), it feels not quite good. It would be fitting in a trance/techno song, but in this case, a dirtier, less happy sinth would have been great, or at least next to the dub parts.

On the same note, it apeared at some place you inserted a trancy/techno sound in the dup parts that were not fitting at all (ex. 1:58).

Other than that, interesting track!

ewwww... GROSS!!!

Always nice to shut down our brain for 1 and a half minute!!

JaShinYa responds:

If we've made you brain dead.... then mission accomplished!

@ crazyAce01 : Jackie Chan???? I say it's a Chuck Norris just for the passage at 1:36!!!

!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

I don't understand!!! 0.o 96?!?!?!

But there is still some noticable details that can give hints (but it's still better in quality than majority of things posted here :P)

Cahzmana responds:

yeah, there's 1 hint.
Reverb, its hard to master and make it sound good at 96kbps.
but other then that...

Wow... Super!!

Direct dans mon MP3!!

It's your lucky day!!!

At 0:54, there is a complete silence. NEVER EVER IN ANY WAY POSSIBLE IN THE WORLD SHOULD YOU DO THAT!!! (for a long periode of time)

I will not add this song to my mp3 player for the sole reason that it is not loud enough. Your master sound peak should be at 0 all the way.

Other than that, great job!

Blackmajiick responds:

Holy dickmonkeys, another one!

Actually, i still have FL studio open. Let me just go and fix those problems really quick :D

Edit: Problems solved :D

YAY!! But I'm not adding you to my MP3 yet :P

The first kick is weird... did you accidentally(or volountary?) doubbled the note?? Because it is breaking the beat

Starting at 0:24, the second snare is a little bit rushed, see my PM for the beat I saw there.

Intro is definitively catchy (at least until the beat comes in)!

Be carefull with the delay, at some points it is off beat (annoying... a little bit!)

Other than that, definitively better than the last ones

BowserThedestructive responds:

OH That's what you meant in the PM!, Oh I see, yes the kick is actually 2 kick's seperated by EQ one for the high part and mid range the other for pure low kick bass tones. Yeah I didn't notice the delay causing it to be off beat my stuff tends to be out of wack sometimes by just the way I find it sounding good sometimes.
I shall try even harder on the next beat.. ^.^ Thanks haha..But yeah there is 2 "intial" kicks then a standard drum kit for the "hats" and another kick mainly crunched and satured and pushed hard for that "sound" but because one has a built in humanizer "I use EZdrummer" but I also have other drum things. Like Stormdrum. And the intial samples making up the partial beat has a "sway" swing to it from fl studio I added just a touch to add something humanize into it. I think the two combination of this caused a slight "un even match up the intial beat sections" but I liked it so much I didn't even notice.

Computer has no brain... USE YOUR OWN!!!

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